tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2833781365332925585.post554049149049685620..comments2023-09-27T17:30:10.091+02:00Comments on VOX POPVLI: "Eternal Memory" by L KingwillVOX POPVLI :http://www.blogger.com/profile/12066568323733418958noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2833781365332925585.post-36278251987771808212010-10-10T15:06:13.970+02:002010-10-10T15:06:13.970+02:00I thought it was just an incredibly detailed momen...I thought it was just an incredibly detailed moment, captured in time and so real and believable and so scary I mean- so ADULT. It made me really feel with the character and also keep wanting to predict what was actually going on the whole time. <br />I like the way your writing makes me feel like I'm watching the stuff happen. Nice one L.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2833781365332925585.post-63651341550829083622010-10-08T22:28:44.024+02:002010-10-08T22:28:44.024+02:00Snap...the big C huh? Really well written and grip...Snap...the big C huh? Really well written and gripping. This piece really takes on through the story.<br /><br />...Metaphors? I guess you could take it as a reprieve or as a comforter but I didn't read that far in to it. Well spotted I guess.<br /><br />I preferred the description of the son at the end, tied things up nicely, a bit of a paradox for someone to cause the character pain and joy at the same time.Leonardo di'Capitatedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06489986049965613195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2833781365332925585.post-73496805574213462152010-10-07T21:38:35.502+02:002010-10-07T21:38:35.502+02:00Wow, so beautiful. I sense genuine feeling, and a ...Wow, so beautiful. I sense genuine feeling, and a complete lack of melodrama. I especially love the simplicity of the last line, as well as the metaphors of the ocean and the room upstairs. <br /><br />Sonya Linkov here, in case you're wondering.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com